Simon 的范文分析16

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Simon 的范文分析16 







Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. 

They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.

Do you agree or disagree?








 

大家看着思路自己先说一次:

观点:大多数年轻人在学习上已经承受了足够的压力,没有在业余时间工作的额外责任。

解释:学校的要求和全职工作一样,老师们希望他们的学生除了每天上课外,也要做作业和复习考试。

解释:当年轻人空闲的时候,我们应该鼓励他们和他们的朋友一起享受休闲时光,或者把它花在运动和其他休闲活动上。他们在毕业后还有多年的工作要做。




大家看着思路+词伙自己再说一次:

under enough pressure with their studies在学习上已经承受了足够的压力

the added responsibility额外责任

spare time空闲时间

a full-time job全职工作

exam revision备考

on top of 除了……之外

attending lessons上课

doing sports体育活动

leisure activities休闲活动

finish their studies毕业





 

然后看一下英文回答,关注词伙和句子的连接,自己不看英文再说几次,说到比较熟练为止:

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.


 


 


大家看着思路自己先说一次:

观点:同时,我不相信社会有任何东西可以让年轻人有义务去做无报酬的工作。

解释:事实上,我认为它违背了自由公平的社会价值观,而强迫一群人违背他们的意愿做一些事情。

解释:这样做只会引起年轻人的不满 ,他们会觉得自己被利用了,而父母则不想被别人教怎么去教育自己的孩子。

结论:目前,没有人被迫做志愿者,这无疑是最好的制度。

 





大家看着思路+词伙自己再说一次:

gain from obliging有义务

do unpaid work做无报酬的工作

goes against the values of a free and fair society违背了自由公平的社会价值观

against their will违背他们的意愿

lead to resentment导致不满

raise their children抚养他们的孩子





然后看一下英文回答,关注词伙和句子的连接,自己不看英文再说几次,说到比较熟练为止:

At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.







 


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