Simon的范文分析14:国际援助

摘要: We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help,

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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help,

so we should only be concerned with our own

communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


大家看着思路自己先说一次:

观点:一方面,我承认帮助我们的邻居和同胞是很重要的。

解释:在大多数社区里,都有一些人很穷或处于不利地位。

举例:比如,即使是在最富裕的城市,也有可能找到无家可归的人,对于那些关心这个问题的人,通常有机会贡献时间或提供资金来帮助这些人。

举例:在英国,人们可以通过多种方式提供帮助,从捐赠衣物到在施舍处提供免费食物。

结论:当问题出现在家门口的时候,有明显的方法可以帮忙,我可以理解为什么有些人认为我们应该优先考虑当地的慈善机构

大家看着思路+词伙自己再说一次:

fellow citizens同胞

homeless people无家可归的人

volunteer time贡献时间

give money提供资金

serving free food提供免费食物

a soup kitchen施舍处

on our doorstep在家门口




然后看一下英文回答,关注词伙和句子的连接,自己不再看英文再说几次,说到比较熟练为止:

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.


大家看着思路自己先说一次:

观点:与此同时,我认为我们有义务帮助那些生活在我们国家之外的人。

解释:在有些国家,人们面临的问题比我们所在的社区要严重的多,而且往往更容易帮助。

举例:比如,当非洲国家的儿童死于可治愈的疾病时,富裕国家的政府和个人可以通过购买已经有的疫苗来拯救生命。

结论:向国际慈善机构的小部分捐款可能比我们当地的帮助更有影响力。



大家看着思路+词伙自己再说一次:

beyond our national borders在我们国家之外

die from curable diseases死于可治愈的疾病

save lives拯救生命



然后看一下英文回答,关注词伙和句子的连接,自己不再看英文再说几次,说到比较熟练为止:

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those    who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when   children are dying from curable diseases in African countries,  governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an  international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.


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